Paranoia
By Sophie.E
"Dragan!!!! come onnnnn, you said we were gonna play spotlight!"
"Shut your mouth Kaja, I'm looking for my headtorch."
Ollie, Cliff, Kaja and I have been waiting for what feels like hours and Dragan finally gives up.
Cliff is first to be in, Ollie was found within a matter of seconds, Kaja and I moments after.
We all give up on playing and decide to walk around.
Everyone turns their heads towards the bush, "I could've sworn I saw someone in there…"
"C'mon Cliff your just seeing things"
"No! Ollie, I'm being serious."
In the end we all decided to check it out.
"Cliff you going crazy, no one's here."
"Trust me Dragan, I'm telling the truth! I know what I saw."
"Uhm Sophie? I don't have a good feeling about this"
"It'll be fine Kaja, if anyone is there im gonna beat them up" I say as I pick up a scooter.
We continue to walk around when Cliff and Ollie disappear, like any remotely normal person we decide to search for them.
"I don't like this, they're gonna jumpscare us, I know it!"
"Kaja, like I said. I have my so-called weapon" we both burst into laughter as we hear something in the bush again.
"Come on guys its getting pretty dark, we have to go inside soon"
"Dragan shhh I see someone!"
Kaja points to the bush with her torch and i see what she was looking at, it was Ollie.
I hold the scooter tight and ask Kaja if she saw Cliff too.
"I don't think he's there, maybe they split up"
"I'm not sure Cliff would agree to that after what he saw in the bush" I reply
She nods in agreement
TO BE CONTINUED! :D
Hi Sophie, its Bella from Paroa School.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this and I found it super intriguing. It had really great punctuation and I liked how the story got laid out. Its got such a great cliffhanger. I love playing spotlight but it does get a bit scary when your playing in the bush! Maybe next time to be BTB (Better Than Before) you could put a little bit more description in and take a little bit more time to explain things, but other than that its really good!
From Bella.